Monday, 21 September 2015

Best sentence Challenge


For writing a couple of students had to put their best sentence that they had written on this page:


Read the Best sentences we wrote this week!This image rendered as PNG inThis image rendered as PNG in
Suddenly, there is a splash and a shower of water cascades down from an upturned leaf and splashes onto the muddy floor of the rainforest, drenching your new trainers.Stella
The snow leopard crouched down until his furry chin was millimetres beneath the milky snow. Julia
the button was pushed and a huge red light spun around like a big red spinning top. Emily
Waves crashed onto the submarine like rocks falling onto it from the volcano that was exploding!!!!!       By Darcey

               Jenna melted in the warmth of the glowing sun sinking
          into misty ocean wondering what adventures awaited her.
                                                                           Courtney

mum warm up the engine it rumbled like a cat starting a fight.  Erin

Remembers when you heard the waves breaking down on the sand. Jaylen

He started tiptoeing quietly before being attacked dun, dun, dun...  
He suddenly froze as though he was paralyzed but he was being watched.

Jason

He suddenly ran towards the pool you fall in booooooom you suddenly saw a hery thing running like a bull trate at you.
by Travis  

Suddenly a deadly strike stuck the hunter, fatal venom flew through his body like a jet taking off in flight. he dropped to the ground with pan his voice balloude throughout the canyon.  


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